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Editing 100 Words About Love

Sharpened Blue Wooden PencilI finished editing all the 100-word stories I wrote last month.

They will be gathered in a collection with the title 100 Words About Love.

I only made changes to about half of the 31 stories.

None of the changes were major:

  • I changed the title of some
  • I changed the tense of some
  • Remaining changes were minor around word choice

Going forward, I will edit my monthly challenge pieces as I go so I don’t have 38-31 to do at the one time. I need to manage my time better.

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Deep And Lowdown FINAL VERSION

Free stock photo of woman, motherboard, mother, pregnancyI continued editing the stories I wrote for last month’s writing challenge.

I edited Deep And Lowdown.

I made a few minor changes:

  • I changed the title to Deep & Lowdown because I thought it sounded better
  • I combined words to improve the flow of the story (i.e. sheet is cold to sheet’s cold)
  • I corrected typing errors
  • I cut unnecessary words
  • I changed words used because I found a better way to put the point across

 

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A Knight’s Tale FINAL VERSION

Free stock photo of ball, leather, hobby, leisureI continued editing the stories I wrote for my January writing challenge.

I edited A Knight’s Tale.

I made one change to this story, quite a big one.

The first draft was written in the past tense (i.e. I waited for Marcus).

I decided I thought the story would be stronger written in the present tense (i.e. I wait for Marcus).

This meant almost every word had to be changed.

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A Different Altitude FINAL VERSION

Free stock photo of italian, landscape, mountains, natureI started to edit the 100-word stories I wrote last month.

I started with A Different Altitude.

I made a few changes but nothing major:

  • I added detail to improve meaning and sentence structure
  • I cut unnecessary words that were taking up space
  • I changed words because I found a better way to stay what I wanted
  • I added missing letters
  • I had to prune a few words to keep within the word count because some of the other changes pushed the story over 100 words
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My Heart, Laid Bare (Poems)

coverI finished the final proof-read of my soon-to-be-published poetry collection, My Heart, Laid Bare (Poems).

The image on the left is the final cover art.

I added the comma after My Heart because it felt like the right thing to do.

This is the longest of my poetry collections at 175.

The poems are autobiographical, written over a period of several years and deal with:

  • Coming out as a lesbian
  • First steps on the gay scene in Glasgow
  • First sexual experiences
  • First relationship
  • First break-up
  • Second relationship
  • Second break-up

Some of them have been published in magazines and anthologies.

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FINAL EDIT: Debut Crime Novel

Brown Tree in the ForestI continued the final edit of my debut crime novel.

The novel is written in the third person with multiple character viewpoints. This isn’t always clear. I decided to make the heading of each chapter the character and date so the timeline is easier to follow (i.e. Ronnie, 2 May 2014).

There are also some minor cuts and tweaks.

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FINAL EDIT: Debut Crime Novel

Brown Tree in the ForestI started the final edit of my debut crime novel.

I thought I was done with this over a year ago and started sending it out to agents and publishers.

It’s been rejected a couple of times.

I didn’t get any specific feedback but decided to have another look at it. I discovered there are a few changes to make.

The first chapter is too weak to open with so I’ve cut it completely.

The novel is written in the third person with multiple character viewpoints. This isn’t always clear. I decided to make the heading of each chapter the character and date so the timeline is easier to follow (i.e. Ronnie, 2 May 2014).

There are also some minor cuts and tweaks.

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Editing Poems & Short Stories

Free stock photo of creative, macbook pro, notebook, workingI continued to edit poems and short stories I’ve written over the past few weeks.

There are over 30 pieces left to edit.

Some of the pieces to edit include poems for my sequence 20 Signs Things Are NOT Okay and the haiku and hay(na)ku I wrote during my recent challenge

I edited a few poems. Only a few needed changes, very minor tweaks. The other poems were fine.

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The Ballad Of Sarah Rose NEW VERSION

Brown Tree in the ForestI continued the new version of my crime novel, The Ballad of Sarah Rose.

There is a lot of work to be done.

I edited three chapters.

In these chapters, Ronnie calls her other children and tells them their baby sister hasn’t come and the police are on their way. They all agree to come over.

Her daughter, Jena, is in an abusive relationship and tries to cover up signs of a beating the night before.

Her son, Owen is about to have a second child with his wife, Saffron.

Her other daughter, Helena, who is Jena’s twin is in denial that her relationship with her lover Libby is falling apart.